by LouZiffer
I like your story and the idea.
This can continue for many chapters.
I was first confused by the names you choose to give them.
Thanks. :)
I already have a rough plan for the remaining weekly wishes.
The names may sound weird to you, because the story was originally written in German, and I wanted to keep the names.
5! Amazing! The description of the forest is perfect. So is the "unshaven" pussy.
Great!
Don't worry about the English language, most readers are not native speakers.