All Comments on 'Just Say Yes! Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I like your story and the idea.

This can continue for many chapters.

I was first confused by the names you choose to give them.

LouZifferLouZiffer5 months agoAuthor

Part 2 now here: https://literotica.com/s/just-say-yes-pt-02-1

LouZifferLouZiffer5 months agoAuthor

Thanks. :)

I already have a rough plan for the remaining weekly wishes.

The names may sound weird to you, because the story was originally written in German, and I wanted to keep the names.

Norway_1705Norway_170518 days ago

5! Amazing! The description of the forest is perfect. So is the "unshaven" pussy.

Great!

Don't worry about the English language, most readers are not native speakers.

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