All Comments on 'Kenny and Hypnosis Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Goos growth progress!

I really liked the story development, and this is me personaly, but if you're still not set on how to progress, maybe make it that she is so much hypnotized to the point where se returns the couch, and even becomes a slave of him?

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(I have submitted short(er) stories involving my characters on Reddit and CHYOA but I submit to here too now) Stories about MILFs and Matures.

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