All Comments on 'Kim's Camping Trip'

Really!!! The End!!!! This is a great story with just few loose ends hanging around. Please continue with part 2 maybe 3.

I did not write this with the intention of a sequel in mind, but depending on reader feedback, I might reconsider

This is a great storey hopefully you can continue it in a similar way for at least the remainder of the camping trip.

I could see shifting the focus into Sherry and Keith’s tent and occasionally shifting back to Kim and Lance hearing the moans and screams coming from the tent next door. Perhaps Kim and Lance could peak through the screen windows and observe at some point. Please continue. Thanks for sharing.

Great writing with equally great descriptions.

Will the "neighbor" become involved.

Oh the possibilities.

I think the ending was perfect. Sometimes the untold story in our head is best.

We all expect a sequel . The possibilities are endless.