All Comments on 'Lila - Book 01'

Man, that's hot with a capital H !

Can you introduce me to Lila? Pleeeeeeeeeease!

You write really well. Loved the story, and your imagination. Wonder which elements are true? More than I might suspect, I think. Hope there's a follow up!

for all I know. Stopped reading because your lingerie-shop redhead seems incapable of normal speech. After the fifth time "the redhead purred" I decided she must, in fact, be a cat. Please don't objectify your female characters - it's such a turn off.

Okay - I promise not to objectify if you promise not to leave anonymous comments - and how can you score it if you haven't read it?

I'd ignore the person who commented but failed to read the story (what's that about?). For me, this was a great insight to Lila and what makes her tick. She's a sexy woman - and you're a sexy writer. Thanks.

great story. keep going

Awesome once again, I read and re-read this. Better and wilder than how mine was. You are getting better and better as a writer everyday. Keep it up, lol.

"Cowgirl" xoxo

SEXY STORY... Especially the incest.

im a 19 year old girl and masturbated almost throughout the read

Everynow and then I come back on here to read what you have written....and like the very first time it amazes me how well you did. Looking forward to a book 4 maybe someday.

Cowgirl

Hi Lila xoxo

I'd love to write another chapter. I'd make it even better than the last!

You can contact me on tprovocateur@yahoo.com

I'd like that :)