All Comments on 'Locker Room Revenge Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, another good chapter. She is not completely broken but there is still the rest of the day. Hopefully she will not get too sunburnt as that would be too cruel. How many guys will take her? Will the welcoming group come back to taunt her? Will a teacher find her? So many options. Please, write more unique and creative ways to humiliate her. There will be a point where the readers will want to help her get some revenge but only after she is broken and really does become nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Next please.

julieslegs3julieslegs3about 2 years ago

The humiliation in this story is delicious

spock21spock21about 2 years ago

I always enjoy how you leave the main character at the end of your stories. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can't wait for the softball team bonding sleepover. Humiliation galore !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well I have put a hit on all them bitches and they will be dead now. You are one sicko.............

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Can't wait for another chapter. I would love to know who finds our heroine in the parking lot and what they do to take advantage of the situation. You have already set up the lawn guys to be the lucky recipient, but I would sure love to know how some of the boys baseball team react.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Damn this story is amazing I am in and endless loop of love to hate it, but hate to love it. Its also sad I want more though I would like to see more characters getting the same treatment. Possibly the vary characters do the torture.

ForTheLoveOfFemdomForTheLoveOfFemdomalmost 2 years ago

I would love a part 3 to this story. You've done such a great job with it and the lesbian domination is awesome.

lillyjones1402lillyjones1402almost 2 years ago

Wow amazing. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I feel so bad for our heroine, Jessica. Seems like the leader has a bit of a crush on her. I think the leader is taking things way too far because she wants to get Jessica’s constant attention (you know how boys pull girl’s ponytails in the playground when they have crushes, it’s like that). I really hope Jessica isn’t raped by strangers and that her parking lot video isn’t posted online. That’s such a terrible thing to do to someone and even the thought of it diminishes any initial arousal I felt. I really hope the leader can make it up to Jessica, because this is really really bad. Imagine if Jessica’s next step is offing herself? :(

OzeminotaurOzeminotaur11 months ago

It's lucky that this is fantasy as this sort of treatment would put someone in the psych ward or make them seek a bloody revenge and if it was me I wouldn't have cared what my parents said I'd just leave get a student loan and work my ass off to get a degree then come back for my revenge

maddictmaddict2 months ago

Mean girls (!)

Any chance we will get the video

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Glad to have the chance to write my odd stories. What I write isn't mainstream but I enjoy writing them for those that enjoy them. I love feedback and to share ideas that I have for future stories. Please know that I do like to experiment, so some stories will be very differen...

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