by creativeboyinspring
Well, another good chapter. She is not completely broken but there is still the rest of the day. Hopefully she will not get too sunburnt as that would be too cruel. How many guys will take her? Will the welcoming group come back to taunt her? Will a teacher find her? So many options. Please, write more unique and creative ways to humiliate her. There will be a point where the readers will want to help her get some revenge but only after she is broken and really does become nice.
I always enjoy how you leave the main character at the end of your stories. Keep it up!
Can't wait for the softball team bonding sleepover. Humiliation galore !!!!
Well I have put a hit on all them bitches and they will be dead now. You are one sicko.............
Fantastic story. Can't wait for another chapter. I would love to know who finds our heroine in the parking lot and what they do to take advantage of the situation. You have already set up the lawn guys to be the lucky recipient, but I would sure love to know how some of the boys baseball team react.
Damn this story is amazing I am in and endless loop of love to hate it, but hate to love it. Its also sad I want more though I would like to see more characters getting the same treatment. Possibly the vary characters do the torture.
I would love a part 3 to this story. You've done such a great job with it and the lesbian domination is awesome.
I feel so bad for our heroine, Jessica. Seems like the leader has a bit of a crush on her. I think the leader is taking things way too far because she wants to get Jessica’s constant attention (you know how boys pull girl’s ponytails in the playground when they have crushes, it’s like that). I really hope Jessica isn’t raped by strangers and that her parking lot video isn’t posted online. That’s such a terrible thing to do to someone and even the thought of it diminishes any initial arousal I felt. I really hope the leader can make it up to Jessica, because this is really really bad. Imagine if Jessica’s next step is offing herself? :(
It's lucky that this is fantasy as this sort of treatment would put someone in the psych ward or make them seek a bloody revenge and if it was me I wouldn't have cared what my parents said I'd just leave get a student loan and work my ass off to get a degree then come back for my revenge