All Comments on 'Lonely Hearts Ch. 04'

Well done and very erotic and exciting.

Will there be more of the two of them?

Thanks for the good read

Then he could marry Marsha , lending a little proprieity to it, then they could all live together.

Great story and series. Like previously said, he didn't tell her he loved her. Finish the story since you didn't end it with The End.

Great series entirely, you should defently give this a finishing chapter to good to end the way it did.

My fantasy was to fuck my sister just this way. I tried once when she was too young and small for me, but baby sister knew her whole life, I wanted her. Never happened, and now she's gone from a stroke and it can never do it....but thru this beautiful, sexy, erotic, exciting story, I have finally enjoyed her body...

Shit way to end the story. Serious passion killer.

porn.

abusive and demeaning language is not erotic.

Great story, and good read. I'd love to read another chapter that would include a threesome and Marcia.

Loved every page.

Just a shame there isn't more.

Rapier

What a great series, well written with a great storyline.