All Comments on 'Los Cinco Hermanos Ch. 12'

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TropiloverTropiloveralmost 7 years ago
Amazing

I just has to comment on the last piece of the story. I usually don't go with many-parts stories but this was amazing. The character development, the kinky situations, the detailed descriptions when needed and left to us readers imginations when not. This is first class writing. Thanks. I'll go through your posted works for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

I was really hoping that you would have a second series of this written by now. Something along the lines of the five sisters would be awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please

Please this needs to have a continuation of some sort. Beth needs to meet Cassie either on her way back to school or at school.

IJS0904IJS0904about 1 year ago

You've written a great series and I would love to see it continue. Your characters are fascinating and the situations they find themselves in are wonderfully fun. Thanks for sharing.

VashoncoupleVashoncouple19 days ago

Loved the series. Wonderfully written. Great characters.

As others have commented, a follow-up series would be well received.

Well done. 5*

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