All Comments on 'Love Potion'

Love the story but most of all I love the last line, don't be long before you give us another story. Thank You.

Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it.

i hope theres a second part to this cause it was bloody brilliant.

That was a super nice elevator ride!

Thank you!

M1

What a clever tale you have spun for us. I hope more readers take the opportunity to read it, because it's wonderful.

Just lovely. Thank you.

I loved it! Great story, nice twist, nice use of a $5 word (ephemeral) and just generally bloody brilliant - to quote Werewolf Enthusiast!

I think my favorite moment was, it's my mother Gisela

Didn't see that endinxdg coming. Well written story. Just long enough. I hope others feel the same. Thanks for sharing.

Actually I found the ending rather a let down. Clever, yes, but I felt annoyed at the psychic for abusing trust like that, and that annoyance wiped out the nice fuzzy feeling the rest of story had created. 4 stars.

Sweet little story! It made me smile and think... life's good.

Thank you for writing.

Oh my, what a cute story. Loved the last line. Thanks for sharing. Good luck with the contest.

Maddie

A very nice cute story. Just don't be afraid to expand on your characters and dialogue. :)

And very nice twist at the end.

:-)

Dan

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Ha, Ha, Ha! Got me!

An easy read, left me with a renewed appreciation for romance.

Thanks

The guy however was very fast and NOT the least bit shy. The girl wasn't looking for love she just wanted to be fucked. well written and fun...

Loved this story! It had a perfect little twist at the end, too! It was sooo good!

Really cheesy, but very entertaining. 5 stars