by TamLin01
Very clever and well written, but not particularly exciting. But I wouldn't want to read it again,
As a story, I really enjoyed it. It was unique and captivating. Very well written. However, as an erotic story, it wasn't quite "enough." Didn't get my juices flowing, so to speak. 5 stars regardless, and I'm intrigued to read more of your writing :)
Well written and frightening; more "lit." than "erotica". Well done.
A very engaging story!
But why does Girl Power always have to be the Devil’s work?