All Comments on 'Love Sees Me Walking Naked Pt. 02'

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lazy_readerlazy_readeralmost 6 years ago
Interesting change of direction

Thanks for continuing the story. I enjoyed the first part and wanted to see where it went.

I could not have guessed that Rose would show up and get all of them together nude. Like Sarah, I was surprised that Rose told her parents about Sarah's exhibitionism. That is not usually done in these stories. Still, I think it was a good move. I'm glad her parents are so open-minded. I'm glad you managed to skirt the incest issue.

The introduction of a sexual or romantic element (with Rose, I mean) at this point also surprised me. On reflection, it was suggested by the title. I'm glad her parents are good with that as well.

It is very unusual for everyone in an exhibitionism story to know what the exhibitionist is doing. I'm happy to see it. I hope it will lead where I'd like to see it go. Your allusion to parts 4, 5, 6, etc. is a good sign, too.

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Vitavie is of mixed European extraction. She studied maths and art history in Germany. After a less than glorious employment history, through lack of motivation, but a lively social life, she married a business man and converted to being a socialite. She writes essentially in...