All Comments on 'Loving Wife Ch. 01'

Can just see you lying across her lap getting spanked and getting hard. You've got me hard from it. Keep it up.

Great start -- well done -- very subtle build-up that makes it quite effective -- I don't see this as a transsexual/crossdresser story though -- to me (so far) it's BDSM -- I with there was a Femdom category

Of a beautiful relationship.

Chicks rule! And if they don't, they should!

I look forward to seeing where you take this. I also agree that I wish there were a FemDom catagory. keep up the good work.

this is the ideal natural progression toward female dominance in a loving relationship.

The story is good, but how many real couples call each other "my love", "my darling", etc.

Great beginning. Moving on to Ch.2

a little too mushy with the "yes my darling" no "my darling" for me.

He needs to open his eyes and see her for what she is - a manipulative bitch.

No, she's not a bitch! He is!

Terrible story.

loved the story actually. a couple loving each other and exploring each other, while giving pleasure to each other. couldn't be any better, other than a little more communication between them. need I add behind closed doors, for the holier than thou crowd? it is a shame that there isn't a way to limit comments to mentally mature individuals, but that seems to be the way in this world. When finding his stash of stories, they should have a very serious conversation, if for the only reason than to side step some issues, and pitfalls that can happen. I wish them well.

I want to see where this leads us to, so let's read on (shall we) and see if & when it builds !!!

hot so far .Thank You

Good start to he series. On to chapter 2

Thank you. There are far too few loving BDSM stories here. I think it is a topic that needs to be discovered more. You can go to ridiculous lengths in humiliation, fetish, pain etc and it still be a loving relationship.

Also recommend you turn off the anonymous commenters. I almost never see anything of value from the anon crowd.

Her progression from missionary only to orgasm control and spanking literally overnight seems a little fast, but I love how lovingly they speak to each other. Five stars.