by AssLover88
Really interesting concept. The ideas and video description really got me going. Hope we get an update with there "talk" in her bedroom!
VERY interesting start. It promises to be more than mere "Wanking" material. You have the opportunity to develop the characters. I urge you to to take it!
Interesting premise.
But it's nothing but back story for what's to follow -- presumbly.
Two stars.
Oh this is a great story line. But these island people are a fucking crazy sex Cult, and if he doesn't get up and run, then he is Ether stupid, or crazy too. What I read it more, or less said that he Qualified be a Dominant too, so why should he except a collar, he should Offer her the collar, to see if she loves him enough to Accept it. He needs to just run because he sure ain't going to be getting much pussy from this bitch, but he will be getting a whole of ass pegging, and spankings from her. Run and don't look back, she didn't even give him heads up, on what she was going to Expect Him to accept, fuck her..
So wait, is George from Algoria and just has the same traits as Lee, thus why the mother didn’t think her daughter could accomplish this feat?
This is good stuff, and I love his fairly realistic reaction to the big reveal.
However I wish their early relationship - including first playing with chastity etc. - had gotten a bit more focus. Honestly that's a pretty good first chapter there. On the other hand I can understand if you really want your story to take place on the island, and it's what makes this a unique premise rather than another "my university girlfriend introduced me to chastity" type of story. But I think seeing more of Lee's emotional reaction to some of this stuff could have gotten more focus, as it would better contextualise the later stuff.