by BreakTheBar
Definitely enjoyed it & liked your style of writing, made reading easy.
Please continue with the additional chapters you outlined, I look forward to reading them 👍🏻
Loved the story but was concerned at first about the number of chapters. After getting used to the character development, i understood. I am eagerly awaiting whatever comes next.
Please continue! All of the next chapter options sound like a plan - lets see what you can do with them! 👍😈
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Was good, a change from the normal, but still the same high standard. Only thing that threw me was the title, made me expect a girl on girl type story, masseuse is the feminine masseur that masculine.
Too much repetition, unnecessary wording and dull dialogue for my liking but others seem to enjoy it. Good luck with your stories.
I really enjoyed it and was looking for where to try to answer the poll then realised who you are!! I love your work!!! I'm always waiting for your new additions of AMA and Font of Fertility!!! For the poll, I can't choose between the goth story or the ex but I'd choose both!!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZING STORIES!!!!!
Great story, you really write well. Only one small error that didn't take away from the work: Eden drove to Trevor's place but afterwards he drove her home. Still a 5 star story.
excellent, can't wait for what comes next. wondering though about her age - is she really 34 with a baby and a daughter in her 20s?
Awesome read. I like all your ideas. Marissa first, Eden/Rachel next and finish it up with stepmom/daughter 3some.
Please continue.
All of your story ideas are a great offshoot of this one.
And a personal request. A bit of Bondage would be appreciated. A massage while either or both or all (if you include Rachel) are bound. Spread of the table, massaged, orgasm denial till full release.
I think you could do a BDSM scene justice.
Please consider. And Thank you for this long format too. Love a long story.
OMG..loved it but want to know what happened on the date between Trev and Marisaa
Lots of possibilities here, all the one's above would work for me.
Lets go to Trevor and Marissa next
WOW !!!! loved the story, loved your writing !!!
my vote is for: Masseuse and the MILFS
Congrats and keep it up !
Keep up the good work. Great sex scenes, varied and juicy. Look forward to more.
Shouldn’t it be “masseur”, as the character is male?
Apart from that clanger, very hot read!
Weird idea of what a country club is. Really weird. His parents being members would have ruled him out ofmworking there. Avoid awkwardmess.
Hey B the B,
In re: to further adventures...YES (to all!) Start with whatever appeals most to you - we readers will keep you energized and on track!
Great story and great fun!
Mel
Two issues;
1) a Masseuse is a FEMALE massage therapist, a MASSEUR is male.
2) Eden stated that she is 34 years old. That is NOT middle aged. At ALL. She is a MILF, but not a “mature” one by any stretch of the imagination. It would’ve been more realistic if the numbers were switched to 43.
Other than these two issues, this was a very well written story :)
Both Masseuse and the MILFS and Masseuse and the Big Titty Goth sound like a lot of fun.
Really enjoying the story. My two cents is to explore Marissa and then the Milfs. You’ve introduced all three characters, might as well keep it going. At this point the ex is simply part of the back story related to Eden; she doesn’t need a main role. And fix the masseur issue! :)
Absolutely well written and hot story. I would definitely like for the story to continue in which ever order you think will work best.
More of this, please! We absolutely need more Eden and we need to know where it goes with Marissa.
Fantastic story! 5 stars ... and please continue with "Masseuse and the MILFs" ....
The correct title for a man who gives massages is masseur. Masseuse is the correct title for a lady massage therapist.
An excellent story. Hope to see more when you have a chance. I'm also into your Quarenteam NW and Font of Fertility series as well. Looking forward to their continuation too. Thank.
Need a chapter or four of "Big titty goth" - I feel that's where this story is (or at least should be) heading.
Great story telling!
fucking 10/10 ive been reading stories on this site for years and this story is amazing. please continue this! eden and marissa are amazing so far and i really hope they gets more anal scenes
Great story, but one aspect grates.
Male giving massage = masseur
Female giving massage = masseuse
Definitely a hot story. I love hot horny MILFs with no attachments. More please. Five stars
I'm most keen to see where the relationship with Marissa goes, personally, but all of the options sound awesome and I would love to see all three explored eventually. Great story so far!
Five stars and please continue the story with Izzy and a threesome with Eden and Rachel. Can't wait.
Well-paced, interesting, and sexy. Looking forward to the next in the series!
Awesome job… I’m an English teacher so I give you high marks! Can’t wait to read other adventures of Trevor
Loved it! It’s a great read, and I can’t wait for the next episode. Do with it as you see fit, it’ll be good either way.
Loved the buildup of the story. This is a warm and humorous story. Looking forward to seeing more of Trevor.
I definitely enjoyed this story & am anxiously awaiting the further installments. You have a real winner with this one!
Very well written. So why not five stars? A minor criticism is that men are masseurs and women are masseuses. My real problem, though, is that you lower yourself to the level of almost every other Literotica writer when you must have your character possess the biggest cock his MILF lover has ever seen and making reference to that fact every time you can. Why is it so many writers (apparently) believe no man can be desirable or competent to have sex with a woman unless he has a 99.9th percentile cock? 50% of men have smaller than average penises. That is an undeniable fact. Nevertheless, it looks like no amateur author has the chops to write a sex scene without his main character bursting out of his pants with an absurdly big tool. It’s just such a cheap way of describing love scenes without thought or imagination.
I enjoy your writing as much as that of any author on Literotica. I hope I’ll find in your other stories that you don’t rely on the easiest and most ridiculous device every time.
I immediately went to look for “Masseuse and the Big Titty Goth,” but you said that Might be a further adventure. Here’s one vote for Yes!
Any further adventures would warmly welcomed, may I suggest Jessica’s 18th birthday surprise!!
Voting Yes for further adventures as you already have ideas that seem to be percolating. So please go with it.
Great story. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for your great writing ability without all the typo and grammatical errors I see with almost all other writers.
I enjoyed the story but was disappointed with how quickly Trevor was turned into a caricature. There may have been a better story with him being more reluctant to be with Eden
Great horndog spanking story! No surprise there. Always hot. Definitely more of all these horny babes, goths, milf, milfs, daughters, all together. You keep writing, I'll keep lubing. 🍆💦