All Comments on 'Maybel-line Ch. 05'

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marklionmarklionover 14 years ago
Great Chapter!!!

Manny you wrote another great Chapter about Mabel and her boyfriend. I like how you develop the story line and how he was able to deal with her exhibitionist tendencies. The way you wrote this chapter teams like the series is ended is that true?

risingthunderboltrisingthunderboltover 11 years ago
Pleasent Surprising Out of Box Story Many Feathers

It Got me Curious after reading the first stall and the story is Nice.I am disappointed that you dint write any Affectionate/Love telling Scenes between james and May ...

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