All Comments on 'Meeting at Berlin/Germany'

You switched from she to he and back again. Hard to follow.

One switch, after Anka. No back switch.

not only is this badly edited, but you had to throw in gay shit too.

Sherbert! There is a huge block of text missing before "We were both tipsy. Anka....." One day I might come back and find a readable story. Please fix it ASAP

Strong passionate love making between strangers, and more.

There were a few spots that did not flow as smoothly as the sex. Hopefully you will understand the suggestions following:

didn't immediately stripped me - immediately is present tense while stripped is past tense; tense is best if consistent

Just provocatively she took them . . . Just as . . OR Provocatively she took . .

. . . exciting me additionally. Additionally what? The sentence ended .

she had always had a intuition - had an intuition, double vowels are grammatically incorrect

we had different plan . . a different, or different plans

You write errotica well, very well.

Perhaps proof reading, or a proof reader?

Awaiting further installments.

I enjoyed your story, and I’m not an anonymous asshole. Thanks for posting it.

Were like DocWords not anonymous asshole we really loved this story and hope it's not a one off.