All Comments on 'Moment of Lucidity'

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ReefBeachReefBeachover 6 years ago
Startling

Surreal situation, nicely described. Vivid, messy memories!

But surely not first time: they both knew what they were doing. I can't see any innocence/wondering/realisation, newness, etc.

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