All Comments on 'Mom's Fertility Clinic Ch. 09-10'

Great Story. I really enjoyed how the mother craved her son's cock. Keep writing.

I do not understand why he keeps pulling out and shooting on their bodies. All this thinking like a 12 year old is ruining the story.

Love ir

Looking forward to sis joining the family business!

When reading stories I usually pay attention to the story being told,not the spelling or other mistakes. I think you have a good story here. Keep it going.we will all be looking for more.

Finally! 5/5

I love the story. I would like to the mother and son bringing it home where they can toss the business atmosphere aside. 5 stars

The occasional awkward phrasing tends to break the immersion, but there's good stuff here. And correct spelling and correct use of language are literally an integral part of telling a story via the written word. The story cannot be separated from the words used to tell it. Try it. Delete all the words. Where'd the story go? Oops. 4* good effort.

I read that "critical" comment before you deleted it. The commenter gave you five stars, and offered constructive criticism. You deleted it. Between your stilted, almost AI like English, and your thin skin, have a 1 from me. And I'll be running these through a few AI detectors, because I have a serious suspicion you're not actually writing them.

Can’t wait for more chapters, I’m sure there will be group sex with the aunt and the sister

his cum is so potent that he impregnated his whole family even tho theyre on the pill

More please 🤗 you have me hooked on their story .. 😘

Splendiferous, there must be more. So many ways this can go, the sister, the cousin, I'm sure the Aunt, and the Mother are with child already. Don't stop.