All Comments on 'My Bride Ch. 03: Weekend'

So, when I comment, it’s usually to say a story is well written, but this series is an exception. Having read chapter one, I had to continue to the end so I could see just how ridiculous it could get. I’m blown away just how depraved an author can get in writing such stupid drivel. One star for effort. 👎🙉 🚫

Wish I could find out what happens next!

FTDS!!!!

I LOVE stories about female domination especially about a wife who puts her husband in submission and teases the hell out of him. I especially love femdom stories when the woman has nice legs. But one thing I don't like in a story is when the writer uses way too many commas, like in this story. Grammar and punctuation mean so much to make a story good.

Love these stories, hope there will be more

Omg you must continue that story!!!!

Well, too bad the fantasy ended. It would have been better to continue the story and really find out just how bad it was going to get for him. Please continue, it was getting really really wicked and nasty. So many options to continue the abuse. Please.

Horrible story, horrible writing needs an editor more than any story I've read. Abrupt ending with no closure. Read, "FEMDOM BETWEEN FRIENDS", see what a well written femdom story is. Wasted potential.