All Comments on 'My First Big Tits'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good stuff

Sucks about the aunt leaving like that, but continuing on with the story about the daughter and mother will have me coming back for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bravo!

I think you did a great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome

Beautifully executed

billyblogsbillyblogsover 8 years ago
The first two chapters I was ready to give 4.5 stars

The last chapter was borderline 4.5 almoust 5 stars untill the violent part ,for me that wen you pulled the plug . I lost interest and did not even finnish reading the story

billyblogsbillyblogsalmost 8 years ago
from memory

Hay don't lose hart I liked your story up till the vilent part ,what about a bit of romance some hot steamy stuff the kind that leaves you with a picture in your mind that you can take away and have a good flog (wank)

Looking forward to

the next story

cheers billyblogs

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nit-pick

Annika is a distictly Swedish name. If you want to make her German, Google up a German name. Little things like that can be a distraction from the story.

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