by Fields of grass
Sucks about the aunt leaving like that, but continuing on with the story about the daughter and mother will have me coming back for more.
The last chapter was borderline 4.5 almoust 5 stars untill the violent part ,for me that wen you pulled the plug . I lost interest and did not even finnish reading the story
Hay don't lose hart I liked your story up till the vilent part ,what about a bit of romance some hot steamy stuff the kind that leaves you with a picture in your mind that you can take away and have a good flog (wank)
Looking forward to
the next story
cheers billyblogs
Annika is a distictly Swedish name. If you want to make her German, Google up a German name. Little things like that can be a distraction from the story.