by Many Feathers
While I loved this story the first time I read it, I'm a bit unclear about something... is this a repost/rewrite from the original author or what?
This was my first ever venture into incest story reading i loved it then still love it now
Humor, emotion, internal conflict...you've managed to put them all into a fun story. Like most stories, it could use a bit more polishing, but compared to most of the "five rated" stuff on here, you deserve a 9. Well done!
Great story, but as anon in Nashville mentioned - I remember reading this story, so why the repost?
Having returned to Lit as Many Feathers now (due to personal reasons)I have been asked to repost a few of my older, "reader-favorite" stories. So have been doing that for those who have specifically asked. So if you see an older repost, it is for those reasons they've been included here. Please read my bio-page and list of stories for some of my classics, as well as several new stories for your enjoyment. And again...thank you.
I THOUGHT IT SOUNDED FAMILIAR. THANK YOU FOR BEING HONEST ABOUT THE REPOST. SO MANY OTHERS DON'T.
You are an incredible writer. Your stories have quickly become my favorites.
Very well written! Not hard at all to keep up with changing conditions and characters!
bring it on, With your stories I can smell the fire, feel the wind, and enjoy the characters you share. You have rare talent. Thank you
more stories about jake and jakie pls if there are not anymore at the moment pls.
thoroughly enjoyed it. i would surely like a sequel. more of the mom and son duo and in secret would be awesome. you are super writer. keep it up!!!
That is the best and hottest story in a long time, not only did I cum in my pants but I shit and pissed my self too, what a wonderful feeling, great story worth more than a 5.
But it's the most well-written story I've read, bar none.
It reads like poetry, like art itself.
However it's not of my taste... but still, the ratings hardly do justice to this story.
i was so turned on by this storey that i shot my load in my pants
Excellent story. Liked it lots.
Way too long for one part - could easily have been posted in 4-5 parts.
And the anal bits were dirty and unnecessary.
Lukas
A well written story wish there was more to read was sorry to see it end a very well written story and I hope to read more of your stories thank you for a well thought out story
mt
Probably the best series I have ever read on this site.
A good blend of hot sex with emotion. Made me hard, horny, and yet made me feel good about the entire experience.
Very good, and well written, good how you added humour to it too... like bit where describe his dig being huge by saying "behemoth" the big bastards from some final fantasy games!
Sure glad you reposted this it is one of my favs:)
The mix of personalities here, is like a thread that adds to itself and just keeps moving forward. In a way it reminds me of the "Boy in Babeland" series. The link of course is the love that Jake, his sisters, and his VERY hip mother, share. The one thing that the porn kings have never been able to devert my attention from is that love and sex, for me anyway, cannot be separated for long. THAT is why the most successful stories on this site are successful at all! I love the sex in this story. So hot, and erotic, and wet. The love they share kicks it in to high gear for me, and for many others I suspect. Shall it always be! Well done Many Feathers. My only complaint? Where's the rest of the story?
Absolutely Fantastic Story
Very, very well written. Fluent, and creative. Its definately sure to get anyone's juice's stirring.
A mother plus one sister could be enough of a challange. But THREE sisters, all different, WOW! You surely don't mind biting off a lot! My only problem, and it is quite small, is that each of the ladies was so understanding...I would have expected at least one to have had more mixed feelings. Full feathers to you Many Feathers!!!
Whatever you call yourself, whatever problems you may have had, I have no knowledge of them, but have just read 'My Three Sister _ and Mom. Guess I am now a bit speechless, excuse the french, but it is fucking brilliant. You managed to put yourself into the minds of four totally different women while speaking, (and writing as a man). Don't ever stop writing, your words are amongst the best in Literotica...Well done
Peter
What would make these tales better is if you had more graphically described him ejaculating into or onto his mother and sisters, especially the final deflowering of his virgin twin. That would have been hotter. Otherwise, a great, hot story.
Of course it is an impossibility of something like this ever happening in reality, but it is great to get away from reality once in a while, to read a fabulous erotic story
like this one. Thankyou so much.
although my position in the socity is not allowing me to read that kind of those stories but , i simply read it....
it is horribly good i could never stop reading although it is so long ,
if it is made to a movie
don't forget to send me the link .....
I have read this story many times, and each time I have really enjoyed it.
this story is great!! you should really extend it and complete it, it ends a little unclear. But it is the second best story i have read so far!! I will defenitly read it again and hope that it will be extended when i do. thank you for the great story, you rock.
Sex, humor, anal, virgins, this story has it all. Exceptionally well written. A great story.
I enjoy stories in which the participants show courtesy and respect, and if love can be mixed in, so much the better. You certainly did that. I do agree with the reviewer who said it seemed odd that all 4 women were understanding and eager. I disagree, though, that you should write more of it; you ended at a very nice place. These things need not go on forever. Enjoyed it very much.
JRM
In a case I know, the mother becomes bitter. I liked your story better.
The day persons can make things like were did in the story without guilty and remorse we will get the real freedom.
"mommy's here to help you" wow what a powerful story, as I read that statement I almost lost it, emotionally charged, yeh you might think me a right wank but I did enjoy the story, real pleasure to read something well written.
Sometimes, reality can be mirrored in story. I know your story is a mirror, though slightly different, of my own reality. And in my case, the ending has yet to to come, and because we love each other so dearly, I truly think it never will. Thanks for telling the story.
Long story! Great work! I wish I were in his position... any of them! ^.^
unrealistic no guy would act like that after all the teaseing and the mother taking the girls aside for a secret talk he would have gone out of his way to ignore and avoid all of them and would deffinetly not go to the same school as his sister try to keep it atleast sounding realistic and not like something out of the twilight zone
it is obvious you had carefully planned and written this story.
I just want to congratulate you and emphasise you did great!
thanks!
you expect us to believe that he puts up with the teasing and them keeping secrets from him but that he is still willing to fuck them no way he would go out of his way to avoid them going so far as to go to another college to get away from them and he sure wouldn't ever go back please keep your stories realistic and believable
Really good writing. I liked how everyone came into play. I didn't like the way it ended. A spin off or longer ending would be be great Thanks it was a good story,I enjoyed reading it. W.S.
Your amazing writing ability is only surpassed by your amazing ability to draw your reading deeper and deeper into the believable lives of your characters. Please continue to develop your talents as an author and share with the world the wonderful results.
Love to read more, please email me with any new additions to your library.
Michelle Jo
Once again you have managed to put everything together in a very well written story. I was absolutely captivated from the very beginning to the very end. Like some of the others though, I would really like to see some sort of continuation of this story to put things to rest.
I have to say that is one of the best stories I have ever read, I only wish you would have filled in the next morning for us. Thanks again for the great read. Hell I have been to this site plenty of times but this story made me want to register and say thanks.
I believe it could have been longer. But still a very good story. Continue to write.
Having only one sister I read this tale and felt cheated out of what could have been a great life with sisters. Then I remembered that I didn't much like the sister I grew up with and i decided to just enjoy the fantasy world you created.
Well done. It was fun, well written andhot! Thanks.
with another chapter or two. Continue to explore their relationships with each other, and maybe get him to get one of the women pregnant.
Good work.
i loved this greatly..............would have loved a morning with all together and the discussion that came about with all secrets revealed and then maybe an all family lovefest and then maybe a little bit about if they all moved in oldest sis to play...opps..meant stay
Everytime I read this story I enjoy it very much. It would be nice if you were to write a second chapter that was about the next moring with them all finally revealing their secrets. The way you wrote the relationship between Jackie and Jake just makes me wonder if they end up really staying together forever. It seems that Jackie is the sister that Jake cares most about. Anyways, GREAT story, hope you are able to write more. 5***** toby9790.
Its always enjoyable to read this account..of Family's experience.....I also agree that..there should an additional chapter or a closing chapter......Very good story....wished I had a family that open..
It reminds me of my childhood, I also fucked my baby sister and later fucked my mom after she caught us fucking one night,I am 72 my si is 70 and I still screw her with my wife joining us often, her pussy is as still as good as it was then.
he copied it off
http://www.exbii.com/showthread.php?s=904e40fbd31496ba3bf24fa5ef5dce84&t=99429
This was published here 08/20/2005. The link you gave has it published there 12/01/2006. And he had it on here under a different name before that. You should probably check dates before accusing someone of plagiarism.
And great story MF.
Why do you have to be so damn critical,anonymous? Read it and enjoy or
go on to another story . GB
A very good story, I enjoyed it very nuch. The ending could have been better, kept me stoking.
made me come 4 times, u can imagine the amout of lub i used.... wish i had a family like this!! (I hv a bro that walks around in his briefs to much, so I kinda knw hw big he is... He's huge soft... I can onli imagine hw big he is hard!!) my family is so close minded, they dnt even like talking about les or gay fam fwnds, i think their ashamed of them... which reali sux considering im Bi......... bt oh well, they nt gona knw anytime soon. loved it! bt would b nice to hav a finishing chapter:)
It was abit long in the build-up, but still a great story. Need to have a followup with where they go from this point.
A bit too long but however very very beautiful one and well written.Jake is lucky to have these women for hImself and lovIng him.However,i would have preferred the Mum was out of the story,but only that she was aware only that her kids were fucking and accepted it.Anyway thks.
another hot story. i only wish we could have seen the day after thanksgiving with the whole group.
I think that this is a great story. I really think you could make it even better if you wrote a sequel to this that tells your fans what all happens between them after this. That would be great. Anyways, great story, 5 stars.
I like the Dawn character. Physically, she reminds me of an old acquaintance named Dawn. I also liked the tenderness of Jake and Jackie's coupling, with Mom there to help.
we need a page 9 when the whole family comes together, not from lust but from love.
This is one fucked up family. Come on get real, Then at the end, seems like Jackie was having a baby, instead of being fucked. Come on writer, plus the story was way to long. Yes, it was somewhat interesting, but way unbelieveable.
i love the story! thank you writing this and for the person who put "unbelievable" if this is something you dont like stop reading! i hate it jerks put down authors who take their time to give a story to us and for the person who put "page 9" i agree completely!
unfortunately couldn't rate as high as it deserved. the scale is only 1-5 and this story is at least an 11!!!!
keep up the good work
would love to read more of what happens with Jack, sisters, and his mother if they all have sexy together or not
Please consider Jack marrying one of his sisters, even though it's been 7 years since you wrote this wonderful tale of incestuous lovemaking and discovery.
I Agree with others this Story needs a Follow-up. it lends itself to Jake and Dawn with her Married name Marrying her Brother and the Rest staying on in a Different town and eventually state where No one knows them.
Its been several years since this was first posted how about a follow up?
I have read probably 1000 stories and this is one of the best I have ever read. It really needs a follow up.
The bond between twins is very strong it seems strange there are not a lot more stories like this but starting with the twins and eventually getting the rest of an open-minded family involved.
Jake's sex life is a dream come true for plenty of boys. He not only fucks all three of his sisters, but he sticks his well-used prick up the same cunt he came out of--his own mother's cunt. I agree with the commenters who write that Jake should marry the sister he's closest to. That way he can keep fucking her all the time, unload his brotherly balls up her sisterly twat any time he feels like it, and, best of all, fuck a baby--lots of babies--up her pretty little twat. A heartwarming example of true family values.
either a lot of underage virgins here or a lot of readers paid to give rave reviews on subpar work. there was a lot wrong with this so called story like him accepting all the teasing and the girls keeping secrets from him both would drive him away. only a few honest comments and they are unfavorable. this would have been better in the NONEROTIC area because it was a total turn off.
You slept with your sisters and mother. You know how it feels na. Return!!!
Well, SOMEONE'S getting just the most marvelous mother's day present.
All joking aside, quality work.
I read this whole story without ever getting hard - that's NOT a bad thing!
I loved this story! So many ways this can go from here. I was drawn into each sisters "mind", I shared their emotions, their confusion and their desires - mom and Jake as well. Please come back to them and share with us, (your readers) this wonderful feeling of love and care once again.
Willing to help with plotlines if desired but ,wow your have done SO well on your own.
Thank you for such a sexy tail that gave my so much compfort as well :)
was liking the story line then you gates it up having him take a vibrator to the ass...NOT COOL!!! should warn people
This has to be the absolute best thought out, well written incest story I've ever read. It brought back a lot of memories of growing up too. I have 2 older sisters that were always fascinated by my erections back then. Even at an early age I was fascinated by their beauty and I loved the way they loved and kissed on me. When I was 9 my oldest sister who was in the throes of puberty at 13 took my virginity while our 11 year old sister watched. I really didn't know what we were doing back then, but I knew I loved it. I could go at it over and over with out cumming then and my sister loved it because she didn't have to worry about getting pregnant. My 11 year old sister wanted to of course do it too, but she was so tight it took a few more weeks before we stretched her enough for me to slide in. My oldest sister had us do it doggie the first time while she licked her sister's clit. After that she couldn't get enough. My older sister liked to do it 4 or 5 times a week but my other sister wanted it 4 or 5 times a day. We all continued to have sex right up till the night before my wedding when I was 26. Neither of my sisters ever got married. They moved to California and started a bakery together which became very successful. My marriage lasted 7 years and after my divorce they sent me a plane ticket and asked me to come stay with them awhile. That was 12 years ago and I'm still with them and never plan to leave. In fact I wish I had never left them. I love both of my sisters more than I love life. I know now we were meant to be together and I love being back where I belong.
You sir have got to be the luckiest guy I have ever heard of
Haha mind introducing me?
Great many faceted story, quite enjoyable. Thanks for posting for all to enjoy!
This story would've been better served being titled: The Four Sisters and Mom....
I grew up on another side of my family..adopted by grandmas sister, learned of her side of the blood and a few cousins helped bring me up to speed at 9 yeard old and had me keeping them happy for about seven years. I loved them dearly both by heart and flesh.
I relate with the sisters part but never saw mom . Both needed me each seven rounds a day! That ladted about half a year til I wore out.
Keep up the writing..maybe go a bit further on this...
You sir, have earned yourself a bushel basket of Eagle feathers on this one.
Thank you for writing this and please keep writing.
Excelent story and as always with your stories very well written. Many thanks :)