All Comments on 'My Voyage of Discovery Ch. 11'

PERFECT

Love how you mix love and affection into your story lines.

I love that you’re bringing in more psychology into this, slave or otherwise. This has been an exceptional story right from the start.

I’m still turned off and really uncomfortable with anything close to incest, but that’s just a personal issue. Even to the extent that I started researching California Legislation, it doesn’t seem as cut and dried as you’ve portrayed it in your stories. That said I fully understand that artistic license needs to come into play (no pun intended).

I really appreciate all the hard work you’ve put into your stories and can’t thank you enough for sharing them.

Tess (UK)

When is Brooke from "Blackmailed Bride" going to put in an appearance?

LOL...

Great chapter. Loved the explanations Beth was giving to Manuel and Sherry.

Find it a little weird that such a good story has so few comments.

Another winner. I feel like I never want t his story to end. Justlove your stuff.