All Comments on 'My Voyage of Submission Ch. 21'

Another great addition. The continuity fo the story submissions are extraordinaire. Thanks you for great story submissions

Absolutely breathtaking! Another fantastic addition to the main story, otherwise known as an easy 5 stars. Obviously there were bits of this that I was uncomfortable with, (I’ve no idea if others feel the same way could just be my perspective?) so I just skipped past those sections. As I skipped parts I didn’t let it affect my rating. Many thanks for the entertainment!

Tess (uk)

It's interesting seeing parallels between Beth (in Voyage of Submission) and Chloe (in Summer Surprise). Both are exposing people to their internal feelings of Dominance and submission based on the examples they are seeing from either of these two ladies. I’m enjoying these two stories running at the same time (although I think Summer Surprise is happening a couple of years earlier in time), and having some of the characters (like William Thornhill) appear in both threads.

Great chapter as always and I especially liked this exchange.

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Sahar to Beth ("You people are fucking crazy. It's a good thing I like you and you lick cunt as well as you do.")

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Cheers

Agree with Tess, there a few bits I'm uncomfortable with but Alexander seems to be doing well for her brother. The sessions with the ex slaves seem to be going well but concerned about their attitudes and the possibility of slipping back into "bad" habits but that's what conditioning can do fo them.

Another great instalment. Well done. 5⛤