All Comments on 'Named Storm'

Loved the story! Eloquent and well crafted; enjoyed the lady in the living room and whore in the bedroom theme. Thanks. 5 stars!

Very Good!! Waiting for the follow up.

Wonderful detail and likable characters. Bring on chapter 2!

It’s always fun to read a story about a mother being a bigger slut than her daughter.

really well written, a plot with dialogue

Loved it!

Exceptional writing

A corker! I'd like to read a chapter two too.

Both well thought out and written. I enjoyed it very much, and look forward to reading more of your work.

Thoroughly enjoyed the read, thanks

The cold fish becomes a dancing mermaid. Excellent!!

Unless she became lax in her faith living in England all those years, there would be no lush bush, flecked with grey or otherwise. Common mistake many authors make due to the unibrow, but practicing Muslim women are bare from the neck down. The prophet Mohammed commands it. Still a nice tale, and looking forward to more. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham