All Comments on 'Naughty Time Ch. 01'

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ItsMe1949ItsMe1949about 14 years ago
Mmmmmm

Oh, what a TEASE!!! I will anxiously be waiting for the NAUGHTY chapter 2!

mBrowmBrowabout 14 years ago
Should we attribute any errors to the wine?

We must tease ... ** Paragraph

Phrase "Almost immediately I contributed that to the wine", should be "Almost immediately I attributed that to the wine". ** Paragraph

Thanks for the story, though. It's pretty nice, and we look forward to more!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
some explaining is in order

the lost bananas, 5 down to 4, down to 2, and the "same" camisole.

well, you got my curiosity.

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