All Comments on 'Necessity is the Mother of Obsession Ch. 01'

Always an awesome read from you dear author

A bit forced towards the end (it felt unnatural for her to ask for anal after saying she didn't take anything thicker than a finger for months), but overall really hot and enjoyable. Hope you keep it that way 'till the end.

Great start of another series--always look for a new story from you.

You sir, are quite addicting....hitting a lovely balance between so many emotions and delights. Thank you.

Great story and great characters. Very well developed and enjoyable.

Do men even know where the cervix is? Regardless, it can't be penetrated and usually means a great deal of pain. Just reading about him "finding" it was a huge turn-off and took me to a cerebral wtf place instead of mindless arousal that I was here for.

Apparently you missed the fact that he "found" it, not "penetrated" it. The wonderful thing about the muscular entrance to the uterus is that it is a landmark for the anterior fornix, or A-spot, an often neglected erogenous zone. Find the mound of the cervix and move up towards the belly, gently, and you will get some amazing results.

Sorry your lack of knowledge or experience, not sure which, prevented you from truly enjoying the "mindless arousal" you were seeking.

It's also a shame that you posted anonymously, so I have no way of sharing my knowledge and experience with you, except through this limited comments section.

Hope you find something more to your liking elsewhere.

Cheers,

eidetic

While I realize this is pure fiction and fantasy, and the initial premise of the story is decent, it seemed .. incredibly rushed.

The pacing was lightning fast, they arrive, he hits on her a dozen times, she agrees to fuck him, then fuck the clients for him after really only getting to know him for 12 hours.

From a stroke story perspective sure it works, from a character story perspective it's deeply uncomfortable.

Not necessarily a critique, just not my cup of tea.