All Comments on 'New Year, New Beginnings'

Thank you for another fantastic, hot story.

I always look out for your tales.

None of your three characters were believable, at all.

It's a great story, written well with twists and turns to keep it exciting. But for some reason, every time the grandmother speaks, I hear her saying the dialog sounding like Mrs. Doubtfire, and it kind of takes the steam out of the story.

Mrs. Doubtfire doesn't really do it for me...

Off the top of my head, I would like a scene where Jennifer eats a cream pie from her gran, while Danny works his hardened shaft up his sister's ass.

There is potential conflict if a second chapter were written, with Mom finding out. Can that be resolved without bringing her into the inner circle of family loving? Is Dad still around?

Hoping there's another chapter to come.

Lovely!!

Beautifully told. You're one of my favorite authors. Good chemistry between the characters. Endless possibilities if you want to keep the story going.

Not your best. You are normally more loving.

REgards