by TheNovalist
Not gonna lie, I chuckled to myself every time Pete called him "Bob". When Isabelle did it I full-on laughed out loud. Great chapter and as always looking forward to the next.
P.S. It was the last of 2022 ;-)
Really enjoying this story and I can totally relate to Pete’s impatience with 2 pages a week.
Have to say you keep knocking itr out of the park on this one. Keep it up :)
Thanks for thos greaz story. I'm waiting eagerly for the next episode.
Have a good start in 2023
I just recently discovered both of your literary series on this site and am quite impressed. Both are unique in their use of fantasy to tell a story. Once I read the first issue of NewU, I was hooked. I just had to keep reading until I caught up. I congratulate you on your ongoing works and sincerely thank you for sharing your talents and rather fertile mind.
Holy shit this gets better and better each chapter and it goes in directions I never see coming I bloody love it and I love the island too you have a real good talent for writing great stories please keep these chapters coming it’s just fantastic writing. Thank you so so much
I already feel sorry for Bob, I forsee a swift and tragic end unworthy of even a small footnote. The comic relief sidekixk always gets it in ways.that leave no choice but to go...meh
Gets more interesting. Who is telling the truth? Princess Isabelle Maria Bernhardt sounds as though she could be an interesting character in this story. Surely too old for Pete though?
Best wishes to you and yours in 2023 and thanks for this cracking yarn.
Another very interesting chapter. Can't wait to see what's next. I like Pete's sense of humor and his direct approach to things.
Best story of the year in my opinion. Separating the sex from the violence is done clean so that when it is sex, you are sure to reading some seriously action packed scenes and when it comes to the violence, knowing the bloody and harshness of the battle is spectacular. The only problem I have is that you would think with all their power and upbringing, someone like Bob would know that he should not interrupt a lady.
I love the way this story is developing and the humour along with it, Bob. 5*
I kinda like Bob. Seems a decent fella. Hope we see more of him. In one piece that is. 😅😂
Ooops. Just realized I'm on chapter 19 ish and have have yet voted...5+ all the way. I'll go back and do the "vote" thing later. Really. Busy being sucked into this universe.