All Comments on 'No Small Business'

by Many Feathers

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good scene setting, but no buildup

After setting the scene for why they'd have sex, it was wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am. There was a real opportunity for the boss to be reticent, and the secretary leading him on, rubbing herself, telling him all the things she'd done for/with her old boyfriend -- IN GREAT DETAIL -- not just mentionthe fact that she did them all.

She's got great tits -- that's why she was hired -- where was the unwrapping of them? The do you like them? How much? Show me. Tell me what you'd like to do with them, etc. Once the sex arrived, it was just too fast, and, sadly, not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved It !

A really lovely story, well worth reading. Thanks for writing it.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Nice erotic story

A fairly pleasurable interlude. Does not sound as if it would be a profitable way to run a small business but it would be a great way to live....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
pun

An interlude,a s one of the commentators said before me, basically inspired by and illustrating the joke on that Dutch name. Fun to read and nice to imagine

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendover 15 years ago
Just what I needed

Aroused? Not really. But I was smiling after I finished reading it - sometimes that's even better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
offices

I have always found office romances and office sex very exciting. This is no exception. I do agree with one response that Theresa could have expanded on her love of sex in a more exact way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love the hot office romance!

This brought me such amazing memories of when I dated a fellow co-worker. We would sneak away every chance we had to fuck wherever we could. Sometimes I would go into his office and if he was on the phone, I'd sit there and wait and start unbuttoning my blouse and massage my titties while I waited. It would drive him crazy! I would also get under his desk and when he got back to his desk I'd get his cock out and start sucking him off. There were many times when I'd lean over on this desk and he'd unzip his pants, pull out his cock and ram it into my hot, juicy pussy and fuck me doggy style. I loved your story! Thanks for bringing back all of those great memories!

tompo296tompo296about 12 years ago
Mature!!!

since when was 38 deemmed to be mature!!! By the way Loved your story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

@tompo29 - that was my thought too when i read his age...by golly, guess i have to file for pension now? LOL i'm just a couple years younger than that...huh

anyways to many feathers - i still liked the story! well done kiddo :D

JAUNTYOLDONEJAUNTYOLDONEabout 8 years ago
Cute !!!

Cute story kind of reminds me of a scene from Some Kind of Hero.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice indeed

I have no idea whether you are still checking your stories for comments, but 12 years on, I just wanted to note that I really enjoyed this story. A nice tender tone to it and a happy ending. Well done!

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
Monkey business

Sort of cut and dried once the boy friend is out of the picture. If the office was as small as described, it would be hard not to smell the sex in the air if one was to walk in after they just finished. Maybe they had a great A/C unit. Enjoyed the story, thanks

Ravey19Ravey199 months ago

Good short story. Well done.

MeanderlwcMeanderlwc9 months ago

A fun story. Loved the play on his name. That was clever.

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