All Comments on '(No) Strings Attached Ch. 03'

Well crafted. Your dialog is masterful.

Perfect closing line — not the “see you next time” ;).

This is building nicely. Good writing, good dialogue, good story line. Keep it going.

Thank you for sharing

Little tough to sell the dynamic of Tyler allowing Sam to join in knowing the history with Claire and Alexis' relationship with her...5*

Ahhhhhhh!!! That second pg was a trick!!!!!! Gahhhhhhh!!! I was so excited! And then bam.. see you next time… 😩 sooooo not cool!!! I need to find out more!

Oh, this is gonna be good.

Chances of poopy things not hitting the fan: zero percent.

Take your time..until it feels right .

The 'bite' between Liam and Claire needs

to play itself out. NOT suddenly disappear.

🔥🔥

Good chapter!

5

Liam and Claire are straight-up naughty. I’m afraid Claire is fixing to step on her dick, so to speak.

If the group crosses the Navajo Nation, I hope they can avoid Skinwalkers. Nasty, those.

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Sugar Magnolia, blossoms blooming

Heads all empty and I don't care

Saw my baby down by the river

Knew she'd have to come up soon for air

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Sweet blossom, come on under the willow

We can have high times if you'll abide

We can discover the wonders of nature

Rolling in the rushes down by the riverside

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She's got everything delightful

She's got everything I need

Takes the wheel when I'm seeing double

Pays my ticket when I speed

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She comes skimming through rays of violet

She can wade in a drop of dew

She don't come and I don't follow

Waits backstage while I sing to you

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She can dance a Cajun rhythm

Jump like a Willys in four wheel drive

She's a summer love in the spring, fall and winter

She can make happy any man alive — Sugar Magnolia — Grateful Dead