All Comments on '(Not) a Disastrous Winter'

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collin4xxxcollin4xxxabout 1 year ago

Great story…. Although, I kinda like the idea of him making his sister a momma. And perhaps their friend too. He and the friend would make a nice couple. And their single mother sister/sister-in-law moving in with them wouldn’t be too out of the norm, as the two women can help with each other’s baby.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

... quite well written, but - sorry to say that - a bit boring from time to time (too many details, too much german snow history)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really enjoyed this, I did not find it boring at all. I await the translation of 2 thru 8. When you can. thank you. R.E.

GothOsTheC0njurerGothOsTheC0njurerabout 1 year ago

5 I loved it. The characters were well written. It was believable. A slow proper build up. The siblings really love each other and talked, I like build up so it was my kind of story. There was no 8 inch cock etc. I don't need too many details. Keep writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Totally enjoyed this story. I spent about 10 years, off & on in the last century with the US Army, serving in southern states (Rhineland, Hesse, Baden-Wurttemberg), married a young woman from Pirmasens-Pfalz, and experienced many enjoyable times with many friendly Germans. So it is an enjoyable plus to find one writing here. Please keep writing, and entertaining America.

OseekerOseekerabout 1 year ago

Detailed novel length story that I felt could have been lots more arousing.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Not a bad start but way longer than it needed to be.

Hans58Hans5812 months ago

Warum man im deutschen und nicht im englischen Lit diese Geschichte schreibt, kann ich nicht nachvollziehen, dennoch congrats a erotic storing which is really getting someone „horny“

By the way: der historische Anhang ist interessant

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

All these real details detract from a fun make believe story. Who gives a eff about a random winter season in Germany 40 years ago? Also almost lost interest before I got through your intro.

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