All Comments on 'Not Daddy Christmas'

by oggbashan

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mrole over 7 years ago

great fun!

Keep posting

WatcherRob over 7 years ago

What a

Wonderful caring man. Need to be more like him.

MitchFraell over 7 years ago

Very entertaining

and Father Christmas brought everyone a present after all!

thecarolinadreamer over 7 years ago

5 STARS AND SHOULD BE 10!

A very excellent story! Thanks for the read.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Good, but ...

The story seemed heavy on exposition and light on dialogue. In places, it read more like an outline than a completed story.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Another lesson

Thanks, Ogg.

Another damned good story, if a trifle quirky.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Wow

okay wonderful story... some fleshing out and maybe a title change and this would make an excellent book

WilCox49 about 6 years ago

Another excellent story

Very solidly done. Thank you for an enjoyable read!

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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