All Comments on 'One of These Days'

Pretty good until you brought out the master, slave mess. Not good even in fantast.

The minute you start talking about "slave" and Master" you're in BDSM or fetish territory. Go there. Stay there.

1 star

I'm not into the master/slave thing and not sure if Fetish would be a more appropriate category. But, the relationship between the husband and wife was sweet. They had a great time. She wanted a naughty night and got it. They both came out feeling good about the night so I gave it full marks.

It’s nice to read about a couple that are totally into each other. She is horney but seduces her hubby when he gets home , not the black 19 year old neighbor with a 12” cock.

Very well done. Simple and to the point. That I Kept looking for a twist shows the degree of depravity usually in this category.