All Comments on 'Our First Couples Swap Pt. 01'

Whilst reasonably well written, it, unfortunately, lacked emotion from any of the participants. There would have been more feelings from reading a laundry list; Surely, the wives especially, would feel some kind of angst at what they have done. Where was the connection the following morning, checking that their spouse was still ok with what happened. Much too bland.

Very hot! Will there be a part 2?

good first story

Cannot wait for part 2. Thanks. 5 stars.

A good start but looking for conflict of some type to give the story some interesting avenues to explore.

Too much detail about the cabin etc. no mention of kids, both couples married for a decade. Still, I gave 5 stars for the concept without angst and sexual description. Only one POV. Next chapters should describe other's.

No bad at all.

I hope ch2 will be about what marco and marci got up to, and ch3 about Shannon and marci putting on a show for the guys before all four indulge in swapping in a shared foursome

Great weekend sex.

Hott!

Good story. My husband and I first swapped after six years of marriage, and now we both crave the thrill of fucking friends whom we trust and to whom we are very attracted physically. It's not for everyone, but for couples who love to fuck, it's the best fun ever.

I am interested in the emotions involvedin the participants, not the mechanics of the sex, whichthis was heavy with.

The first time me and my now bf swapped was 6 months after we started dating. It was same room swap. He got to see a big cock enter my pussy for the first time. He said it was the hottest thing he every seen. We been swapping partners now for 5 yrs. He tries to find well hung guys . He says the hottest is when I fuck bbc

The writing wasn’t peppered with bad grammar & typos, so that was good. However, the whole thing was clinical and flat. Kind of bloodless.

Really good detail and mental process. I want the other parties story!