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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The prose is a little stilted and the dialogue feels a bit wooden

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Work has been crazy busy and I have had some family issues that are taking up a lot of time. I am still writing and have active drafts for all 3 of my series in motion. I appreciate your patience.