All Comments on 'Peeping Tom Ch. 06'

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tsememgbtsememgbalmost 13 years ago

Terrific - as are all of your stories. Thanks!

tompo296tompo296over 12 years ago
Sneaky

What a subtle twist to the end of your tale. I was expecting that Karen had fulfilled Toms expectations, but not in the way portrayed. Super, Well Done

prop69prop69almost 12 years ago
Interesting ending

How could she have passed the test? I do not understand.

Schrödinger's cat - where there was no correct answer.

If she left without participating she was screwed.....

By staying and being an active player..she failed.

Loved the writing, just unsure of the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not understanding the ending.

He gave her a test to measure the level of her fidelity? That doesn't make sense because it is unlikely that he would not return any of it. Was he just setting her up? I like your writing but this ending makes no sense. You should consider an epilogue.

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