All Comments on 'Penury Falls'

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ScorpioJJScorpioJJalmost 2 years ago

Nice short story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the ending. Surprised me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent short story. Very enjoyable read, and I loved the surprise ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent, short read. Really dig it.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Interesting story!

5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Best story I've read on this website in a real long time.

Lector77Lector77almost 2 years ago

Thank you for the vignette.

Well done.

Bronco56Bronco56almost 2 years ago

Excellent short story. It was for once a nice feel good story. 5stars

teedeedubteedeedubalmost 2 years ago

Huh. Yeah. Salvation. What a wonderful feeling.

GerMagGerMagalmost 2 years ago

5 star, a great short story! Thank you.

the_Otter_guythe_Otter_guyover 1 year ago

Well told, good uplifting story.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

I understand where Larry is coming from but I haven't thought about going swimming. A poignant reminder that getting older isn't always a bed of roses and can be tough for those of us that are the ones left behind. Five stars and thanks.

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