All Comments on 'Playing the Blues Ch. 01'

I loved your story, but it could be better. Get an editor to weed out the grammar and other errors. I'll happily do it for you.

Why do you always capitalise the B in bass?

I hope that you continue the story. I'm interested to see where this is going.

This was a good introduction to the players. I hope that there are more chapters coming. Being a writer, I don't criticize as I think that you are writing your style. Keep it coming ahaz.

Except for some typos and a couple grammar errors, this is shaping up to be a decent story. I'm very curious as to where this leads. Look forward to reading more.

I really liked the start of this story and can't wait to see where it goes from here

Brilliant start with real promise for the future. Hope we don’t have to wait too long. Thank you

Please fellow up on this story it was great.

Good first chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

A couple of others have commented on the grammatical and other errors so I'll forget the comment I was going to make. Which leaves it for me to say thanks for the memories. I wouldn't have thought many people much younger than myself would know Peter Gunn (best version Shelly Mann & his Friends, circa 1959/60, but that's just my opinion---others may think Henry Mancini). And for my money Albatross was the best piece of music that early Fleetwood Mac produced. Great stuff!

The Blues won't be playing these ladies, at least not for long. The story is out of the blocks strong and off to the races for comments and 5 star votes. I gave it a 4, cause I wanna see how the plot continues to develop. So good job Ahaz

I fully enjoyed the intro to this series . Glad to know I don't have to wait for the next installment . Liked the mild way that you overtly reveal the fact that only one of the band members is unattached . That to has me eager to continue with my reading of this next installment !😍

This was lovely. You write well and sympathetically, and you drew me in nicely, I am looking forward to the next one.