All Comments on 'Point Hollow Ch. 05'

Sharples was Rickrolled! Excellent wrapup for the story.

Man, I hope Danny got justice other than his murder being solved, I hope to know whether he got justice in his humiliation, you know a peaceful rest or so after the humiliation ordeal. But man I can't wait for your next work

Nice wrap up. Another nice story toward culmination of saga of The consultant of crime..... We hope to see you on literotica after this consultant of crime is done as well......

Unless the ultimate showdown against the Consultant of Crime taks more than ten years to complete, or he could see Jeff Slake being killed in a bar fight from within his mind, and I dont think that.

Then the IC will destroy the myth of Hollow Point, "The Thin Man" could be the link to the Consultant. Or once again I could be wrong "again" Good story WW always await your posts with interest. Keep em comming please.

The mirror was a good substitute! STILL - a super great story! I'm still waiting on getting that B * # @ H "owner" of the stupid TV station on the floor after a BEATDOWN by the BLUE crowbar! THAT - would definitely be worth it! At least Sharples is out of the picture!

is waiting for the next installment in this long series. I go about my reading for awhile then come back to check in on you. Scotty

Excellent ending to this part of the story. Would love to see Cindy give Ferrall or Ikea a good old ass whooping. Keep up the good work.

The mannequin idea was good, but a mannequin stays still while a man moving in a mirror appears to be moving. But good thinking on all that. So one more small story to wrap up some things, and then we move into the final trilogy. Don't worry, the author will be writing more stories after the final set... :-)

Sharples is down. I hope

Ferrel is next.

A great read, WW.

.......great story line, amazing imagination, incredible wordsmithing, wonderful

characters all efficiently woven into a remarkable segment of Donald Troy's career.

Pulsifer42

both are strive with living legends,,,,,TK U MLJ LV NV

When you tie up someone tight enough they can't get lose for {say} an hour there are marks on the wrists that don't fade away after death.

Here we have a dead guy tied up and killed some time later, but no marks n the wrists. If they were there it would blow the whole of Sharples' story up.

Is Sharples really down or will he escape again; a technicality or an escape? Excellent story and surprised Don's reveries didn't reveal anything about Hollow Point.

There must be an another case that sends Don back to Point Hollow. Too many loose ends about that place. Like Angela terror visitations in Don’s dreams

***** Great piece of storytelling. Thanks for sharing.