All Comments on 'Pretty as Sin Ch. 02'

A lot of work. Very well worth it for the reader. 5*****

A great conclusion to an unbelievably-erotic story. Though I did sometimes have trouble remembering who was who, with all the characters.

Thanks for the kind words! I do kinda agree—even I had trouble with the names at points. It's part of why I go for such obvious names, like "Poppy" for a Sloth succubus and "Yumi" for a Gluttony succubus. :P

And thanks to everyone for reading—this was a really fun sort of exploration.

Oh, and if you want to see more like this—and get early updates, plus this story's non-canon alternate ending where the succubi won out—check out my Patreon and consider joining my lovely supporters in pledging a buck or two! <3 https://www.patreon.com/gigglinggoblin

Myna is one of your hottest characters yet, I would love to see more of her!

Thank you that was really really hot and well written too! I loved the characters and what they made each other do and feel. Please keep writing!

was rooting for the succubi, but a good story even if the team i was rooting for lost... if only they hadn't made yumi lose control they woulda won

I gotta pay for the succubi ending!? ... I hate Patreon. The last time I used them it took me five years for them to acknowledge that I didn't want to pay anymore.

Mendicuizi (Mandy) - Lust

Mynaletris (Myna) - Greed

Ellesetvio (Ella) - Pride

Yuminimeve (Yumi) - Gluttony

Xelapapicu (Poppy) - Sloth

What about Envy and Wrath?

If you ever leave Patreon, plz post everything on Literotica. I have known of several ex-Patroen members who decided not to post their stuff elsewhere. They made a lot of people mad.