All Comments on 'Project Tendril Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Absolutely amazing

I started reading this for the plants but was very quickly convinced that the plants would be taking a back seat. Wonderfully written, I look forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What's better between...demi-god...diner...NSA...alien plants!!!

Great start and very original. Looking forward to the rest of the story... Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amused

Very funny

You write well with wry humour AND we have 3 plots on the go already

I expect character development on the plants soonish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very sexy!

I love the story so far, very sexy. My only gripe is actually completely inconsequential, no way in hell he had the dinner you described ready from scratch in 15 minutes, especially not in an apartment kitchen.

eideticeideticabout 7 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous: Very Sexy

Thanks! And I agree, NO kitchen could do it from scratch in 15 minutes. That's why he showed up with the crock pot and grocery bag - most was already done and needed heating, etc. Sorry it wasn't clear in the story. He's a man who believes in being prepared! Cheers.

rayironyrayironyalmost 7 years ago
Grin!!

Yes, giggle-worthy!

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 2 years ago

Fun. Good characters. Great plants. 5 stars!

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