by eroticbaroness
A truly lovely story, with enough detail to let you experience the feelings of the characters and the intensity of the scene, without actually getting in the way of the action! A must!
Very well written. Was,so absorbed into the story that I felt each and every erotically enhanced sensation.
A well written story about a mixed up girl who goes from bad to maybe worse...or bad to just as bad. Anyone looking for a good short story with some sizzling sex can just stop here and read. Plus, the writer does fashion some nice character development is a short span. Well done
Started reading the story, with one eyes shut, half asleep and ended the story with a raging hardon, at three in the morning. Too bad it ended quickly, when I really started to enjoy it.
Like all good movies, I want a sequel, that's just greedy me speaking.
I wonder how he will pay her back "Took the beef jerky, I'll pay you back next time".
Your loving
ManMeat
I really like that you just hint at what happens with her current boyfriend/hubby. Some things are better left for mystery. Nice one.
I am sure it's an re enactment from a movie...
Nevertheless, nicely narrated... A good read...
This author is Gifted...
Graphic sex emphasizing self gratification. A minimum of character development and no discussion to frame a story line or a conclusion.
Some good scene setting and then dives into an excellent sexual fantasy and sometimes that's exactly what you need. I certainly did.
A man who fucks hard and then cleans up. Surely every woman's dream!