All Comments on 'Searching for Sasquatch'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now6 months ago

I like TnT - I will always give his entries a read - even if they are in categories, I would otherwise skip. This one is a fine tale - I loved it. 5/5

gunmakergunmaker6 months ago

Not my usual but good. You did good!

shadrachtshadracht6 months ago

I liked it, but the weird "was it a dream" nature, along with lack of any real resolution lowered my enjoyment a bit. I loved what was there, but definitely thought there'd be a twist. I just would've loved a more complete ending. 4*

Coochielover71Coochielover716 months ago

Loved it. You never cease to entertain me, submission after submission.

YdontuYdontu6 months ago

Excellent writing, sizzling hot sex and twist ending. Top notch writing and worthy of 5 stars!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

The story was good, but the ending felt rushed and unfinished.

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanus4 months ago

A fun and imaginative story. It is well written with very good character development.

RMike35RMike352 months ago
Not to critique the author but.

For the story to end like the character just imagined a beautiful college girl into existence is far-fetched,honestly it made it pointless that none of it happened.Just wish the author had written a touching love story of an age gap relationship instead of a figment of imagination.

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2024-05-30: "Son's Ex-Wife" is coming tomorrow. It's a one-shot Mature piece. My beta-reader wants another "Dude" episode but I've got a mini-series that needs finished first -- and I keep getting side-tracked with one-offs that refuse to wait patiently. Life intrudes as we...