All Comments on 'Secret Santa Says She's Naughty'

by VeryNiceGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice

One of the best stories posted in a while. First in a month a read to the end and did not regret. Good balance of character development story line and erotica.

Tommybowler

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it

Great story, nicely paced.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions.

FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
A most enjoyable and well-written tale!

Thank you for sharing it with us! Welcome to Literotica, new author, and please have five big shiny ones!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Well written, nicely erotic, and just the right length for a coffee break. Keep those stories cumming

However, somebody as concerned about her work should have enough sense not to post an erotic story from her work place computer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice story

Well written and moves at a good pace. Hope to see more.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
OMGawd!!

So hot!! I came just reading this! Please, please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Group sex

Does he bring Wendy and Debbie in next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

Keep up the good work, this was fucking hot!

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Excellent Story

Well written and hot to read. Have you got more similar stories to come? I look forward to more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent story

I got hard reading it. Hopefully you have more writing like this in the future.

Will there be a sequel where she has Tim bring Danny there to give him lessons on how to be a Dom and they both take her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Got it right

That was "Very nice, girl"

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