All Comments on 'Sister Act'

I thought I was going to rub myself raw by the time I finally climaxed reading the story. Enough to keep it hard but not enough to make it cum till the end. Great story line and loved all the interaction. Would have been nice to include a little guy on guy blow by blow for spice but spectacular story. Loved it

Hot damn. That had to be one of the best stories I've read in a long while. All that action going on between everyone was so damn HOT. Just when I thought things couldn't get more interesting, you turned it up a notch. Any thoughts of another chapter? I for one would love to read more about their adventures.

Well done!

Hot and erotic with a lot of incest thrown in.

It's great to read work that's well planned and executed so well.

Thanks

Wonderfully erotic story, beautifully written.

that was awesome , you need to write a book . I didnt want the story to end .

well done :-)

What a fantastic story. Eroticism in its finest form, beautiful written, with a multitude of sexually arousing images flowing throughout the story, a memorable and stimulating enjoyment for the Reader.

My thanks to the Author for his skill. And, I am motivated to read this story again, but this time, at a much more leisurely pace in order to enhance my enjoyment, even more.

All I can say is, you have done it again, combining so many aspects it would give me cramps in my fingers to describe them all. Well done again, mate!

great story and well written.

bravo

Yet another one of your amazing stories.... To me your stories are set out to do one thing... make people cum..... You are a great writer and your stories easily pull me in.... this could definetly be the best erotic story out there....

Outstanding work. You are a true wordsmith!

Sorry, I lost track of my scorecard less than a third of the way through and just skimmed down to see if it looked any better - it didn't. Why spend the time setting up an intimate-sisters back story then turn it into a group thing with a bunch of generic people having generic sex in rotation? The sex was maybe okay for exhibitionism/voyeur fans but kind of bland. Nine pages for what?

Dam: is a barrier that impounds water.

Damn: to declare something to be bad, unfit, invalid or ilegal.

This was the far best story yet. Having two sisters at one time. On the other hand, I'm soon to have two best friend coming to live with me as soon as I can get them from another country. Just the thought it reading this made me hard thinking about how my life will change. Thank you for this story. Well laid out and well enjoyable to read.

Now...even at just forty, we both had great careers and felt it was a little too late for us to be thinking about starting a family of our own. Mom and dad had once again depended on Robyn to do that for them, now...they were disappointed once again too. Another reason why Robyn had felt it necessary to get away for a while, away from mom and dad. Neither one of them were too happy with the way things had turned out, trying to convince Robyn to give Mat another chance. Fat chance that was...she'd already given him another chance, two of them in fact. Finding him cheating on her three times before now.

@@@ Fuck parents and trying to live up to their expectations or letting them meddle in your life! I just dont understand how or why people let their family rule/ruin their lives like that! Ive always done what I pleased and never gave a damn what the family thought! ...so it was foreign watching my wife walk on eggshells with her family on different things over the years, lol. @@@

Maybe Mat had found that disarming about her, but once again had it been me, it would have driven me nuts. And to this very day, I still swear she had flirted with me at her own wedding, somewhat drunkenly suggesting that I should have arrived a few days earlier before that, giving her a chance for one last fling herself.

@@@ oh hell, I would have SO asked my wife if it would be ok with her if I banged her sister, lol. Well in the story anyway! My wife's sister has a cutsey little girlish voice that would probably give you serious wood in bed, but her body? Ugh. Pass. Maybe fifty or seventy pounds ago. Maybe. And like in the story, you couldnt live with her having to listen to her all the time, lol. @@@

Robyn was again laying back in her lawn chair, completely oblivious to the situation inside. I however wasn't oblivious to the fact that my wife was standing there next to me bare breasted, nor that she had obviously seen my wet spot and knew immediately what I'd been doing, or at the very least, what my cock had been obviously doing. Leaking.

@@@ you know Ive read this shit in a few stories, but I just dont see it happening, sure my dick leaks a bit when its hard and im excited, but enough to soak through your boxers and shorts? Never happened, even with being hard for like an hour, certainly not the five or ten that he was standing there @@@

And don't you dare do anything with that," she grinned. "Save it for later."

@@@ hell, better do something with it now so you dont blow in five seconds later, lol. @@@

It felt wickedly perverse standing there jerking myself off over the sink,

@@@ aah, the benefits of being tall, must be nice! @@@

The wine we'd had with dinner had been just enough to sustain the day long buzz she'd been nurturing.

@@@ I quit drinking a long time ago, but do remember the enjoyment of a good party weekend with friends, drinking just enough to stay a little drunk but not too much! Lol @@@

As we lived only a few short blocks from the beach, she enjoyed running near the ocean, along the sand, listening to the waves as they came crashing in.

@@@ oh man, Id love that! I always wanted to retire to a little beach house down by some dink town, just enjoy the ocean, fishing and reading books day after day... Well and lots of sex too! My wife would go totally stir crazy by day two. That woman cant stay in the house all weekend to save her life! I just dont get it! ;) sometimes I wonder who I married, nothing in common! @@@

Though Chris usually slept in a thin pullover satiny, or even silk shift to bed at night, she sometimes wore nothing more than one of my old tee-shirts to bed. Sometimes with, but sometimes without panties, depending on the mood she was in. I liked the without mornings the best, as that usually meant she was in the mood for a quickie before either one of us dressed for work. A rather nice way to start out the day. Thus...it was a silent, though obvious sign to me of what I could expect.

@@@ must be nice! My wife drives me nuts, she wears almost as much to bed as she does out:/. Panties and pajama bottoms and a shirt, only takes off her bra. I finally got her wearing shorts but have yet to convince her to sleep nude :(. Really pisses me off when I think about it, lol. @@@

But even more so, the sudden appearance, the outline of her lips pressing against the material of the sheer panties she was wearing, clearly displaying her protruding lips, her "camel-toe" as was so vulgarly, somewhat jokingly referred to.

@@@ actually thats when shes wearing something so tight it pulls down between the lips and puts on a show for us @@@

"My cock you mean," I groaned as she continued to work it, without missing a beat.

@@@ ...not with soap, you dont! Every guy knows the pain of getting even a little soap in the tip of your cock and learns not to jack off with it! @@@

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"I fingered my sister. Finger-fucked her cunt. Thought you should know."

"Jesus! Chris? Isn't that..."

"Incest? That what you're thinking? I don't know...maybe it is, a little anyway, but even if it is, even if that's what you want to call it...that's all I did...all we did."

@@@. Incest? Bah! Ya know, weird but I dont even consider two sisters doing stuff together to be incest, doesnt even register as such! @@@

"We? You mean...she finger-fucked you too?"

"Yeah...she did. We did."

"And why is it I'm only hearing about this now?" I asked, though the sudden realization of where this was going and why...suddenly hit me.

@@@ because shes my sister and its really none of your fucking business even if you are my husband. @@@

"Yeah, maybe you should start at the beginning and tell me why you did that in the first place, maybe then I'll have a better understanding as to why you'd want to even consider doing that again in the second place."

@@@ and whats with his fucking attitude? I sure as fuck dont get that! If my wife had told me that, even before i ever developed an interest in reading this stuff, I would have been like;

" Ooook, well have fun. Hey, um, can I watch? Hell, maybe join in?" @@@

"She was scared...nervous, had almost decided to back out of the wedding that very night, and probably would have, had it not been for mom and dad pressuring her to go through with it. After all, they'd spent a lot of money on it...on her, the dress, invitations and what not. The list went on and on."

@@@ another reason its best to do what the fuck you want and to hell with what the family wants you to do! Ive always hated the waste of big weddings anyway, I just dont get it! @@@

"You kissed? What do you mean you kissed? You two kiss all the time."

@@@ geez, this guy is stupid and retarded. @@@

"Holy shit Chris...you enjoyed fingering your sister."

@@@ she really needs to find a husband that isnt a dipshit, lol. @@@

To this day, I'm not sure of what my answer would have been had my wife not been holding onto my cock at the time. Especially if I'd already come before then.

@@@ what his answer would have been? Shes not really asking you dumbass, shes givibg the courtesy of TELLING you. Shes gonna take care of her sister wether you fucking like it or not, thats family. @@@

"Yeah, I'm ok with it. IF, you honestly think it will help with all this, though I'm still not sure why it's necessary for her to finger you too."

@@@ GOD is he fucking stupid! Poor, stupid insecure widduw boy gonna cwy cause his wife is paying attention to someone and he isnt getting any! Wah! @@@

"Jesus Chris!" Normally a bit more subdued, though she did have a wild side, I was nevertheless surprised at her boldness out in the open like this.

Is this guy trying to get laid or saved? Lol! Its just a horny naked girl on the beach! @@@

"What if they..."

@@@ Shoot you for being a huge pussy and take your place? @@@

Chris spread her legs obscenely as I finally caved in, diving between them.

@@@ this dude doesnt deserve the treasure trove of goodies being offered up in front of him! @@@

Lifting up slightly to peer over towards our audience, they...now sitting up, looking towards us.

@@@ dude needs to learn priorities! Head down ass up! Lol. @@@

"Your turn," Chris said putting that thought on hold.

"What?"

"I said...your turn!" And then grabbed me, pulling me down and over onto my back. As she did that, Robyn likewise sprang into action, grabbing the bottom of my swim trunks, literally yanking them off. When she did, my cock sprang up like a coiled spring.

@@@ gawd, is he slow! He still had his suit on? Rofl! @@@

"We'll ah...do that," Chris half stammered.

@@@ uh, no,we WONT! @@@

"We'll be there," I quickly agreed even before my wife could. If nothing else, my own boss would be delighted to hear that I'd managed to get my own foot in the door, so to speak. Though I'd leave out the part where I had stood there shaking the man's hand, with his blood engorged cock sticking out nearly a foot while I did so, bobbing up and down as we did that.

@@@ This guy is about as bright as a fucking rock!! No WAY am I letting that dude anywhere NEAR my wife's pussy! Work? Fucking retard! @@@

I was...and I wasn't. This was too good...too horny, too fucking exciting to pass up. "In a minute or two yes...but right now, I think I'd honestly prefer to sit down and just watch the two of you."

@@@ fuck that! You can watch while your dick is burried in one of them! @@@

"Jerk yourself off...and then squirt on us," she told me.

@@@ Well thats a huge fucking waste! Lol @@@

It was a nice robe, but it wasn't meant to be a warm one, almost feeling too sexy on whenever I wore it, so I didn't much.

@@@ reminds me of this beautiful japanese patterned silk smoking jacket I used to have... Until my step-mom WASHED AND MACHINE DRIED IT!! I wanted to kill her! Argh! @@@

Patrick and Susan stood there in the doorway holding a bottle of wine. "Hope we're not too early!"

@@@ Well fuck, the story just went down the shitter! Dammit! NEVER add extra players to the story!! @@@

"Surprise," Chris told me winking at me. "Met Susan while we were out shopping today," she then informed me. "Thought we'd invite them over to dinner tonight...told them what we had been planning for you, thought it sounded like fun, so we decided to include our new friends. Didn't think you'd mind that too much."

"Not at all!" I said grinning from ear to ear. "Not at all!"

@@@ not at all? Some other big dicked fuck screwing MY GIRLS?! Fuck. That. Im done with this story, sigh. Its ruined now. @@@

TOO BAD there is ZERO love here, just fucking scum of the earth people...

he basically has to go along with what they want even inviting the other couple along for a fuck fest without asking him before they did....they control everything going on....but then he is just as bad and a typical cock sucker who thinks with his little head instead of his brains so gets sucked in to their perverted way of life and either goes along with it or not...best thing is to kick the pair of skanks in to touch and move on...

Nice until we got to page 4 where the 'monster dick + porno dialogue' started. Then it's a loser.

I haven't quite finished but it is a really good effort. I'd like to give you some constructive criticism. Unless you are positive that you can put a story together with proper grammar, spelling and punctuation, you should have an editor. It is silly to make the huge effort to put together a great story and have anything detract from it. I am not saying you made all these errors because you didn't. The most common mistakes are misspelling or missusing words that anyone with a high school education should make. These words are not interchangable. There, their, they're. They all have different meanings. Threw, through, thru, we're, ware, wear. These sound like unimportant things but in reality, they are mistakes that amateurs make. They also over use certain words that are never used in conversation, like pert. They depend on spell check and don't know that hardon is a word. It isn't hard on. Just my opinion but the one thing that makes me stop reading is when i hear ridiculous sizes on body parts. It can be a woman's bra size when the author doesn't know how a bra is fitted but usally it is the size of a guy's dick. Nobody cares about the size of a guy's dick except gay men and it shouldn't even be mentioned in a hetrosexual story. Either should how much cum he shoots. Nobody cares. lol. This was a great story. The reason you got such a great score is because you did a great job. Hopefully the next one will be better.

Great, Great ,Great

Love how It kept on getting more and more erotic

I thought it was pretty damn good! After all, I read all nine pages over the course of three days. That’s something! Many stories are so poorly written that I quit after just a few paragraphs.

Two hot women? (Almost) any guy’s fantasy. Sisters? Even better.

One guy with a monster cock? One girl who squirts? Various size breasts? Sounds pretty real-life to me.

Like one review mentioned, -I- would have liked to see the guys loosen up a bit and try sampling each other as the girls did so eagerly. Good for the goose, good fir the gander?

Is it a bit far-fetched? Sure. But then again, it’s fantasy.

Well done!