by sachiaiko
OK nikki you did it again now i have to wait tell next month not fair lady... Criketmama
This was a lovely story!
You should submit your work to the publisher I go with. www.venuspress.com
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I LOVE THIS STORY /BUT I AM GOING TO HATE HAVING TO WAIT TELL NEXT MONTH TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER/ IT WAS SOOOOOOO HOT,HOT,HOT
I really loved this story. And I'll be looking for the next chapter for certain. I hope it comes out really soon.
I rather enjoyed the story, it was sweet and undeniably hot. What few quirks there were (typos) can be easily overlooked. I look forward to the next one.
Your writing is just amazing. The imagery was perfect and the young boy with the master is a genius idea. I love the storyline and enjoyed how both of them, at one point or another, had a bit of control. This is amazing, keep it up.
This is one of the most sensuous and sexy seduction stories I have ever read. It provides a profound insight into a hidden aspect of men's sexuality--that once a man has experienced sex with another man, he can never deny the need that has been aroused in him--he may continue to have only heterosexual sex, but the need for sex with a man will always remain with him.
that was certainly a very unexpected but welcome surprise, don't get me wrong, i'm straight as an arrow but that was hot as hell. baby, you got me creaming in my panties ;)
This is so fucking hot. I loved the sex scene. It made me seriously wish I were alone, or with somebody.. special...
Again, I have a little issue with your uses of the words "your" and "you're", but other than that, this is a fantastic, hot story. I'm heading over to Ch. 2 right now. I can't wait to see what happens.
--Soulless
I've read this series over and over again and I've lost track of how many times. The characters are so addicting, the words and phrasing are so flawless, and the content... simply delicious... mmmm. Thank you so much.
Great Chapter! I love all your work! I find myself spending hours after hours reading you stories! Now I'm off to read chapter 2!
where do ur ideas come from loved it so much i wanna learn Daman and more of Eko's world lord this was a hot one cant wait to read the rest