All Comments on 'So Much for Expectations'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

Great follow up!

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Great story! I hope you find cause and inspiration to share more of this couple with us as time goes by.

Cheers

SAGE

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 1 year ago

3*. Not much happened. Not sure why you wrote this sequel.

Was it meant as a chapter 2 of something longer?

JusteenKJusteenKabout 1 year ago

Nice story, not sure that I like your protagonist very much but I'd love to read more about young Whitney.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hope to see a follow up.

I would vote for him breaking it off with the young Whitney and getting back together with the old Whitney if the author can come up with a "nice" way of doing it. Age difference just too much. Might work in the Literotica world but not in the real world.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...