by dawn1958
I can see the difference from the original and this is much better. I like Susan's thoughts during sex much better.
Ray
Used and made to feel everything she feels. Know I am a slut and have nothing to say about it. Just a slut controlled by my desires and needs.
I never read your original story I am sorry to say but I sure love this version. Many times I have reread various parts of both chapters. That is something I rarely do.
Kevin