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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This had the potential to be the perfect story, but you lost me at the pen.

Microbevel8Microbevel8about 7 years ago
Inventive ahain

Clever stuff that Picasso twist. Surprised it wasn't a Conway like Sir Winston used. Very nice ending. Eager to know the inspiration. And to read the subsequent installments! Bravo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

He lost me when the ink shot into her. I sure hope that ink is water soluble.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...

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