All Comments on 'The Bimbo Pill Pt. 02 - Linda'

Super hot story, 5 🌟.

Looking forward to the next part.

Wow... certainly a departure from the fun themes of the first chapter.

Amazing story, I cannot wait for the thrilling conclusion!

Also, go Mavericks!

Great story, but, honestly, I laughed out loud at the "How long?" and the response. Very unexpected.

Love these stories! However, I would have loved for him to have gotten his mom and then his sister pregnant…. With the return of his girlfriend, perhaps she can overcome the jealously of his sister, and join the family and the “pregnant club” too.

Once more, not too over-the-top and they learned how to "comfort" Linda after she came down from the pill, so there was no awkward moment once the realizations hit her. I appreciate the balance and not letting it get out of hand to where it was a free-for-all, as each person experiences the moment without any one or any thing overshadowing the moment. 5

First off, you write beautifully and your mind is as wicked as they come. Love this. More soon please.

Great job. Love the buildup and the description of the drive from Mankato to Minneapolis was perfect. Lived there for a year. Now I’ll need to read all of your work to see if it’s just as good.

Hello All:

Once again, thanks for your kind words and encouragement. Part Three will be out soon. But if you would like to jump the gun and get the entire trilogy without having to wait, you can find it on my page at Smashwords or on my personal website. Simply search for "The Bimbo Pill,"

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Fantastic storey, can’t wait for the next chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Luvin this Hot series. With his hot bimbo mom & sister he'll be worn out in no time.

Great story! More is great.

What would happen if max takes the pill. he seems into bondage... hmmm

tbh I would love if max get his way with the boobs with the long term effect is more shapley body's

Next chapter please!

I’m begging’ ya!

Love it but 4 stars because ‘Ronnie’ didn’t get involved with Linda and Max. Having Veronica watch and get off undrugged is hot in a different sense, but I do wonder how Ronnie would have handled it - perhaps in a different scene.

Doesn’t get tired during a second reading. Your three act play is so good.

Kind of refreshing to see/read female characters that aren't bisexual. I know we'll probably never read about it, but I'm kind of hoping the girls will not need the pills in future to enjoy Max. I kind of like the idea of treating the pills sort of like innoculation: first dose 'primes' the subject and the second or third dose locks the subject in. Makes her more open / confident to enjoy herself, but while still fully in control of their wits.

Great story. But her parents being basically "law-and-order Republicans" ? Obviously this was written before the current political environment took hold -