by HeyAll
Great story. Keep writing and don't let the jerk who wrote the negative review get to you. I liked the lead in to the story and how it built to a hot ending. Some may not think it is realistic, but it is fiction so make it go the way you want. The cluelessness of Nicole is entirely possible as my own kids have not a clue what their parents did sexually, and never will.
I like this story. Hopefully, you'll continue it and we'll get to see how nicole grows under Morgan's tutelage.
I just reread your story. Bloody fantastic. I wrote the previous comment as Anonymous.
Exciting, and a willing, truly consensual power exchange. Thank you.
Different scene. Not necessarily believable, but well written and enjoyable.
this is by far one of the best stories i have read thanks for sharing well written
Beautifully written story, I cant wait to read more of your stuff.
I am submissive, three. Love your stories. It's always a joy and a really yummy experience to read. Never fails to get me going. Thank you
Don't think I have read anything quite like that before.
Enjoyed it.
HeyAll, you never disappoint, certainly not this time. This is a fascinating exploration of what you have called “the submissive gene”, and I have a sense that this is something you have explored before, in depth. Your stories are always well written, with an emphasis on correct construction, grammar and word choice. I could see both Nicole and Morgan in my minds eye, a most pleasant experience. Thank you once again - well worth all five stars, more if they were available.
Having been to bdsm clubs an in the life style for a time it was very good descriptions and very true on the topic. Very good story.
Great story, I hope you continue writing it, was half expecting the masked man to be the lawyer. Maybe have him come in latter idk just a suggestion.